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I want to write a story about The B&Oman in my diary from now on in order to practice my English. I hope everybody learns with me.Please point out any grammar mistakes if I have made any. The B&Oman is a pop singer.However, he is unknown, he is as poor as a church mouse! He always asked his neighbour for a meal and a glass of beer. In return for that, he would sing a little blue song named “Don’t forget me”. And then he would eat the meal and drink the beer. Everybody liked his song and his voice, similar to his behavior just like the song’s name “Don’t forget me”.He is really a love-hate man. I want to write a story about The B&Oman in my diary from now on in order to practice my English. I hope everybody learns with me.Please point out any grammar mistakes if I have made any. The B&Oman is a pop singer.However, he is unknown, he is as poor as a church mouse! He always asked his neighbour for a meal and a glass of beer. In return for that, he would sing a little blue song named “Don’t forget me”. And then he would eat the meal and drink the beer. Everybody liked his song and his voice, similar to his behavior just like the song’s name “Don’t forget me”.He is really a love-hate man. References

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可以帮我看下写作吗？有问题帮我指点一下，谢谢！ 12/8/2017 Cloudy day I want to write some story about The B&Oman in my diary from now on.To practice my English.Hope everybody take up with me.Please point out grammar mistakes if I have made any. The B&Oman is a pop singers.But unknown, he is as poor as a church mouse!He always asked neighbor for a meal and a glass of beer.In return for this, he would sang a little blue song named “Don’t forget me”. And then he would ate the meal and drunk the beer.Everybody like his song and his voice, but this behavior just like his song’s name “Don’t forget me”.It’s a really love-hate man. (2)

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I want to write a story about The B&Oman in my diary from now on in order to practice my English. I hope everybody learns with me.
Please point out any grammar mistakes if I have made any.
The B&Oman is a pop singer.However, he is unknown, he is as poor as a church mouse! He always asked his neighbour for a meal and a glass of beer. In return for that, he would sing a little blue song named “Don’t forget me”. And then he would eat the meal and drink the beer. Everybody liked his song and his voice, similar to his behavior just like the song’s name “Don’t forget me”.
He is really a love-hate man.

可以帮我看下写作吗？有问题帮我指点一下，谢谢！ 12/8/2017 Cloudy day I want to write some story about The B&Oman in my diary from now on.To practice my English.Hope everybody take up with me.Please point out grammar mistakes if I have made any. The B&Oman is a pop singers.But unknown, he is as poor as a church mouse!He always asked neighbor for a meal and a glass of beer.In return for this, he would sang a little blue song named “Don’t forget me”. And then he would ate the meal and drunk the beer.Everybody like his song and his voice, but this behavior just like his song’s name “Don’t forget me”.It’s a really love-hate man. (4)

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I want to write a story about The B&Oman in my diary from now on in order to practice my English. I hope everybody learns with me.
Please point out any grammar mistakes if I have made any.
The B&Oman is a pop singer.However, he is unknown, he is as poor as a church mouse! He always asked his neighbour for a meal and a glass of beer. In return for that, he would sing a little blue song named “Don’t forget me”. And then he would eat the meal and drink the beer. Everybody liked his song and his voice, similar to his behavior just like the song’s name “Don’t forget me”.
He is really a love-hate man.

可以帮我看下写作吗？有问题帮我指点一下，谢谢！ 12/8/2017 Cloudy day I want to write some story about The B&Oman in my diary from now on.To practice my English.Hope everybody take up with me.Please point out grammar mistakes if I have made any. The B&Oman is a pop singers.But unknown, he is as poor as a church mouse!He always asked neighbor for a meal and a glass of beer.In return for this, he would sang a little blue song named “Don’t forget me”. And then he would ate the meal and drunk the beer.Everybody like his song and his voice, but this behavior just like his song’s name “Don’t forget me”.It’s a really love-hate man. (11)

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可以帮我看下写作吗？有问题帮我指点一下，谢谢！ 12/8/2017 Cloudy day I want to write some story about The B&Oman in my diary from now on.To practice my English.Hope everybody take up with me.Please point out grammar mistakes if I have made any. The B&Oman is a pop singers.But unknown, he is as poor as a church mouse!He always asked neighbor for a meal and a glass of beer.In return for this, he would sang a little blue song named “Don’t forget me”. And then he would ate the meal and drunk the beer.Everybody like his song and his voice, but this behavior just like his song’s name “Don’t forget me”.It’s a really love-hate man. (19)

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可以帮我看下写作吗？有问题帮我指点一下，谢谢！ 12/8/2017 Cloudy day I want to write some story about The B&Oman in my diary from now on.To practice my English.Hope everybody take up with me.Please point out grammar mistakes if I have made any. The B&Oman is a pop singers.But unknown, he is as poor as a church mouse!He always asked neighbor for a meal and a glass of beer.In return for this, he would sang a little blue song named “Don’t forget me”. And then he would ate the meal and drunk the beer.Everybody like his song and his voice, but this behavior just like his song’s name “Don’t forget me”.It’s a really love-hate man. (21)

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